Little Claw vs. Travis

Is no-one lee going to critique this person's work?
I guess not…
Here's another critique from BleedingFalcon!
Okay, let's talk about the subjects of the image first. Looking at the relationship between the characters, I like the surrealism of their reactions to each other. Here we have to people learning how to fight, they're covered in scratches and bruises, one of them is holding a knife and both of them are bleeding, and yet they look like they are treating it like a big game!
Clearly these two characters aren't completely human, and you've brought that across nicely in their faces.
Their clothes seem to have dirt marks and shading in all the correct places, the blood staining the shirts looks okay, but I think it's a bit too bold, perhaps make it more translucent because it looks a bit like a large block of colour.
But fabric shading is right on there in a good place!
Proportion is fine, too!
Lighting on the hair perfect as well; just subtle enough not to look too over-powering, but bright enough to be seen!
Brick work on the wall looks fine, I like the murky part towards the bottom-left hand corner, but your isometric projection needs some work on the thinner face of the wall.
Now, that grass!
Oh, that grass!
Oh, that lovely wonderful perfectly rendered with texture and tone grass!
I have nothing bad to say about that wonderful, wonderful, lovely, lovely grass!
I LOVE GRASS!
Now, I get that your going for a scratchy, sketchy kind of feel in this piece, but that lamppost is in need of looking over (particularly around the top part thingy bit or whatever the fuck you call it).
The way the light radiates outwards is perfect, though!
Now, I have a feeling this is just me, but I'm not too sure about the road.
It looks a little too erect foe me, I think it needs to be made a bit more horizontal, however I could be wrong, so don't listen to this part.
All in all, a great picture that's nice to look at.
Congratulations, as always!